This is a sub-page of Proto:Phantasy Star IV: The End of the Millennium.
Somehow this town ends up in serious danger three different times.
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Residences
NPCs
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May Script
A man wearing black clothes
assaulted me.
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Final Script
I saw a mean man wearing black
clothes.
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Translation Notes
The early line is pretty much the same in Japanese. It should be obvious why this got changed.
Objects
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May Script
A diary is left out.
Let me see...
'For some reason,
I have a bad premonition.
I hope nothing bad happens...'
That's the last entry in the
diary...
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Final Script
A diary is left out.
Let me see...
'For some reason,
I have a bad premonition.
I hope nothing comes of it...'
That's the last entry in the
diary...
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May Script
It a bookshelf.
Gee, there's a lot of difficult
books.
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August Script
It a bookshelf.
Gee, there are a lot of
academic books.
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Final Script
It's a bookshelf.
Gee, there are a lot of
academic books.
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Translation Notes
Are academic books difficult books? Perhaps to Chaz.
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May Script
| ...The books are left out.
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Final Script
The table is littered with
books.
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After Using Alshline
Exterior
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May Script
A big meteorite fell
beyond the bridge to the north!
It fell close to
the village of Nalya.
I wonder if they're OK there.
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Final Script
A big meteorite fell
beyond the bridge to the north!
It fell close to
the village of Nalya.
I wonder if they're OK.
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May Script
It's because that investigation
team came upsetting things in
Birth Valley that we're having
problems!
We want the people from
Motavia Academy to go back!!
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Final Script
It's because that investigation
team came upsetting things in
Birth Valley that we're having
problems!
We want the people from
Motavia Academy to go home!!
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May Script
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Final Script
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Translation Notes
Hahn's response is angrier in the final script.
Residences
NPCs
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May Script
I'm glad that everything is
back to normal,
but I'm afraid that Zio is going
to come back and attack us.
We have to defend the village,
at least these children...
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Final Script
I'm glad that everything is
back to normal,
but I'm afraid that Zio is going
to come back and attack us.
We have to defend the village,
and protect these children...
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Translation Notes
This mother went from prioritizing her children's safety to including them in the same tier as the other villagers. At least, that's the way it reads now.
Objects
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May Script
'Lessons on How To Make
Conversation that Grips
People's Hearts '.
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Final Script
'Lessons on How To Make
Conversation That Grips
People's Hearts '.
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May & August Scripts
'What to Say to Land a Sale'.
Quite a studious owner.
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Final Script
'How to Close a Sale.'
Quite a studious owner.
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Translation Notes
The book's contents are very slightly different between prototypes.
Bio-Plant
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May & August Scripts
There's some writing here...
'Sterilization Treatment
Completed.
Please follow the line on the
floor'.
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Final Script
There's some writing here...
Sterilization Treatment
Completed.
Please follow the line on the
floor.
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After the Bio-Plant Explosion
Exterior
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May Script
Since Birth Valley's entrance is
sealed it's nice and quiet, but
on the other hand, when it's
quiet it makes you all
the moreun easy!
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Final Script
Since Birth Valley's entrance is
sealed it's nice and quiet, but
on the other hand, when it's
quiet it makes you all
the more uneasy!
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After Obtaining the Hydrofoil
Exterior
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May & August Scripts
What is that,
a mechanical human?
It can't even walk right
outdoors!
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Final Script
What was it,
a mechanical human?
It just walks around right
outdoors!
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Translation Notes
The final line definitely makes more sense once the player encounters the machines; They're walking around just fine.
