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Talking about the temple, some
time ago there was a man who
kept making stupid jokes all
the time.
I haven't seen him around
recently, but I really liked
him!
Oh? Hey! You, I'm talking to
you!
What's going on. Did you move?
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May & August Scripts
Yes. Some of my jokes were
a hit so I moved on! Ha, ha!
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Final Script
Some of my jokes were such a hit
that I had to move on! Ha, ha!
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Translation Notes
Another literally translated joke. The original line, "だじゃれがヒットシて ヒッコシたんじゃ！", plays with "hitto shite" (Were such hits) and "hikkoshita" (Moved away).
The final English line almost works as a joke, in a kind of vaudevillian way.
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May & August Scripts
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Final Script
And that'll be happening pretty
soon here, too.
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Translation Notes
Chaz jokes back in the Japanese version with "ひっこめ" (hikkome), which about translates to the May line.
The final English script adds an appropriate retort to Raja's new line.
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May & August Scripts
With weather like this, even we
are too afraid to go out.
Although there does seem to be
some of us who are rather
frivolous!
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Final Script
With weather like this, even we
are too afraid to go out.
Although there do seem to be
some of us who are rather
frivolous!
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May & August Scripts
You think you can just open
the door and walk in?
But I'll accept what you say
and let you in.
But if you've opened the door
can you close it?
It's cold outside!
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Final Script
You think you can just open
the door and walk in?
Well I'll accept what you say
and let you in.
But since you've opened the
door, could you also close it?
It's cold outside!
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May Script
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Final Script
It's not that Dezolisians and
Parmanians don't get along...
It's just that they don't
co-exist because of their
different life styles stemming
from religious beliefs.
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Translation Notes
In the May prototype, this Dezolisian's text box is broken. For what it's worth, the text that should be here is identical to the final version.
Objects
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May Script
...it's written in a alphabet
I can't read.
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Final Script
...it's written in an alphabet
I can't read.
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May & August Scripts
Fear of Heights:
A Psychological Examination'...
Then why build a two-story
house?
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Final Script
'Fear of Heights:
A Psychological Examination'...
Then why build a two-story
house?
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May & August Scripts
It's a big mirror.
I guess Dezolisians are
self-conscious about their
looks?
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Final Script
It's a big mirror.
I guess Dezolisians are
self-conscious about their
looks.
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May & August Scripts
Here are their dishes.
They're surprisingly similar to
Parmanian's dishes.
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Final Script
Here are their dishes.
They're surprisingly similar to
Parmanian dishes.
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Tool Store
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May & August Scripts
Equipment Store Management'...
Ah, a pretty studious owner.
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Final Script
'Equipment Store Management'...
Ah, a pretty studious owner.
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Weapon and Armor Store
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May & August Scripts
The weapons in Laconia have
been purchased from Reshel.
So what we have here is all
that we have in stock.
It's first come first serve
while supplies last!
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Final Script
The Laconia weapons have
been purchased from Reshel.
So what we have in stock is all
that there is.
It's first come first served
while supplies last!
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After the Garuberk Tower disappears
Exterior
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May & August Scripts
Regarding the Gumbious Temple,
is it true that it just
vanished?
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Final Script
Is it true that Gumbious Temple
just vanished?
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Residences
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May & August Scripts
What?
It sounds like there's some
commotion outside, but I don't
know anything.
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Final Script
What?
It sounded like there was some
commotion outside, but I don't
know anything.
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Translation Notes
He's talking about Gumbious Temple being obliterated, so this should be in the past tense.
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May & August Scripts
I wonder if the holy flam
is safe?
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Final Script
I wonder if the holy flame
is safe?
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May & August Scripts
No way am I going to accept
your word!
Don't you dare open that door
and come in!
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Final Script
No way am I going to accept
your apology!
Don't you dare open that door
and come in here again!
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May Script
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Final Script
I'm sure you won't be able to
understand the shock we
sustained!
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Translation Notes
Yes, this guy's text box is still broken in the May prototype. At least they're consistent?
Temple
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May & August Scripts
Gumbious Temple?
Such a disrespectful thing
couldn't have happened.
Waaaaa
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Final Script
Gumbious Temple?
Such a disrespectful thing
couldn't have happened.
Waaaaa...
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Calm down!
Pull yourself together!
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The Gumbious Temple has
disappeared?!
Dear me...
We must not get flustered.
It is precisely a time like
this that I must be strong and
reliable!
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May & August Scripts
You're so wonderful,
Mr. Priest!
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Final Script
| You must be a wonderful priest.
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Translation Notes
Rika almost comes off sarcastic in the final English draft.
