This is a sub-page of Proto:Shining Force II.
Story
Sealed Tower
The lesser Gizmos are dead, but the pink Gizmo remains. It teleports away...
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April Script
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Final Script
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...and appears right at the tower's exit.
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April Script
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Final Script
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The evil spirit escapes!
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April Script
We must hurry to see the
king!
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Final Script
| We must hurry to the King!
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Granseal Castle
In the princess' room, King Granseal and Astral stare each other down. King Granseal tackles him, knocking him down, but then Astral mutters a spell...
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April Script
Evil Spirit inside the king,
leave his body, HAAA!
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Final Script
Evil Spirit inside the king,
begone, HAAA!
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The spell knocks the King on the ground, and the evil spirit rises from his body
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April Script
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Final Script
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The evil spirit flies away. King Granseal gets back up and Astral tells him he was possessed
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April Script
What are you talking
about? Tell me.
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Final Script
What are you talking about?
I don't understand.
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Astral sighs and passes out.
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April Script
Astral is exhausted.
He won't wake up to any
kind of treatment.
The minister summons the
soldiers to the hall to
kill the evil spirit.
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Final Script
Astral is exhausted.
He won't wake up!
The Minister summons the
soldiers to the hall to kill
the evil spirit.
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April Script
...that's all
about the mission.
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Final Script
That's all the info I can
give you about the mission.
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April Script
So, all we have to
do is find Evil
Gizmo and kill him.
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Final Script
So, all we have to do is
find the evil Gizmo and
kill him.
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The minister confirms this.
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April Script
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Final Script
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The captain soldier nods.
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April Script
Let's go to
defeat Evil Gizmo.
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Final Script
Let's go and defeat the
evil Gizmo.
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April Script
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Final Script
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After the soldiers leave, the minister turns to the party.
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April Script
The King is upstairs
to see sir Astral.
You must be worried...
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June Script
The King is upstairs looking
in on Sir Astral.
You must be worried.
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Final Script
The King is upstairs looking
in on Sir Astral.
I'm worried.
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April Script
Is he really all
right? Really?
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Final Script
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April Script
You don't have to
worry so much...
but anyway he is old.
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Final Script
Don't worry about him.
If he dies, it doesn't matter.
He's old anyway.
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After the minister is finished being a dick, the King comes down to the throne room. He asks for the minister
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April Script
Here I am.
What's wrong with you?
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Final Script
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The King says that Astral just came to.
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April Script
Astral said, he feels
an ill omen behind
the tower and Gizmo.
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Final Script
Astral said, he feels an ill
omen behind the opening of
the tower and Gizmo appearing.
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King Granseal says it's important to understand the history behind Grans Island.
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April Script
A historian called
Hawel lives in the
west of Yeel.
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Final Script
A historian named Hawel
lives northwest of Yeel.
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The King relays Astral's request to send soldiers to get Hawel.
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April Script
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June Script
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Final Script
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After the minister and King parrot each other for a bit, the King says he has a good idea
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April Script
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Final Script
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King Granseal asks if Bowie and co. can go to Yeel to see Hawel.
If Bowie says No...
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April Script
Do you refuse the
King's order?
Answer again!
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Final Script
You refuse the King's
wish?!
Answer again!
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Not wanting to be trapped in an endless loop, Bowie agrees.
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April Script
Thank you.
Depart to see Hawel
immediately.
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Final Script
Thank you.
Depart to fetch Hawel
immediately.
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Granseal
And so the force prepares to go west. At the town entrance, the dwarf Jaha finally makes his appearance.
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April Script
Here you are!
You came so late!
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Final Script
Here you are!
I've been waiting.
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Annoyed that he missed going into the castle, Jaha joins the force! The group exits town...and is immediately attacked by monsters.
Dammit.
Area Dialogue
Granseal Castle
Before Astral is knocked out
After the evil spirit's escape, the guard to the Sealed Tower is in a sorry state.
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April Script
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June Script
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Final Script
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Translation Notes
The June script removed the ellipses but forgot to delete the line break.
By the stairs to the king's bedroom, a maid shares what she heard with Bowie
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April Script
Well, boy,
can't you hear a
strange groan?
I don't know why,
but everybody ignores
my question...
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Final Script
Well, boy. Did you hear a
strange noise?
I don't know why, but
everybody ignores my
questions....
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The minister saw something frightening.
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April Script
I saw a devil
went into his body...
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Final Script
I saw a devil enter the
King's body...
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A soldier in the king's bedroom is a bit rattled.
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April Script
Ooo, ouch!
I didn't imagine
he's so strong!
Ouch! I was
knocked down!
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Final Script
Ooo, ouch!
I didn't think he could
be so strong!
Ouch! I was knocked down!
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Meanwhile, a soldier tries to explain the situation to Princess Elis.
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April Script
Princess Elis!
I can't pass you.
Trust him!
Sir Astral knows
how to cure him!
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June Script
Princess Elis!
I can't let you up there.
Trust Sir Astral!
He knows how to cure
the King!
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Final Script
Princess Elis!
I can't let you up there.
Trust Sir Astral!
He knows how to cure the King!
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April Script
Shut up!
Let me see my
father, please!
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Final Script
Let me pass!
I must see my father!
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After Astral is knocked out
After Astral's collapse, he rests in the king's bed.
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April Script
Why don't you see
him before you leave?
He must be happy.
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Final Script
Why don't you see him
before you leave?
He would be pleased.
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April Script
Are you going to
see Mr. Howel?
I wouldn't let you
go alone if I were...
I trust you, kid.
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Final Script
Are you going to see
Mr. Hawel?
I wouldn't let you go alone
if I weren't...
I trust you, son.
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Translation Notes
Astral isn't Bowie's father, obviously, it's meant to be used as an old-person term of affection.
The castle workers try to cope with what's happened, and the messenger from Galam got freaked out. A reasonable reaction.
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April Script
The errand from
Galam have left.
He was in such a
flurry and hurry.
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Final Script
The messenger from
Galam has left.
He was in such hurry.
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April Script
Princess Elise has not
taken a rest since
the King fell down.
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Final Script
Princess Elise has not rested
since the King collapsed.
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April Script
I...I've never seen
such a horrible face...
...oh, King...
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Final Script
I...I've never seen such a
horrible face...
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An older man on the outer edge of the castle knows about Yeel.
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April Script
Yeel? Yes, a very
small village beside
the mountain.
Go to the northwest to
get to my country.
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Final Script
Yeel? Yes, it's a small
village near the mountains.
Travel nortwhest to get there.
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Translation Notes
A small bit of detail (How the man knows about Yeel) was removed to squeeze the message into three lines.
Granseal
Two women gossip by the town's well.
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April Script
You heard it?
The King is sick.
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Final Script
You heard about it?
The King was sick.
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April Script
Yes, I did hear it.
Soldiers of the palace
were talking about it.
That must be true!
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Final Script
Yes, I heard about it.
Soldiers of the castle
were talking about it.
It must be true!
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A pet shop / zoo has opened up. One mother's reason for not taking her son is completely different between scripts.
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April Script
I don't think it's
educative for children.
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Final Script
I don't think it's right
to hold animals captive.
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In the zoo proper, one little boy comments on the animals' condition.
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April Script
He looks so sad...
...how poor he is...
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Final Script
He looks so sad...
I feel sorry for him.
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This chicken's foul beak was scrubbed clean in the final script. Just filthy.
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April Script
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Final Script
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Bowie's mother praises Bowie just before he heads out for Yeel.
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April Script
Good luck, [Hero].
Your father must be
surprised in the Heaven.
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Final Script
Good luck, [Hero].
Your father would have
been proud of you.
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Translation Notes
This is the first of several explicit religious references that were rewritten to be more ambiguous.
Finally, the soldier by the exit comments on the Galam messenger's speedy exit
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April Script
That Galam soldier
rushed out of town.
He looked pale.
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Final Script
That Galam messenger rushed
out of town.
He looked pale.
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(Source: Original TCRF research)
